here is something i spilled out in about two minutes...and, yes, it shows about as much thought as that two minutes. not so good, but i do like the first verse...perhaps this will soon become a song, once i get around to tomorrow. ideas/reactions/comments are eagerly yearned for!
hier ist ein denklos lied...na, es ist noch nicht ein lied, aber vielleicht morgen...oder uebermorgen...ai--mein schwedisch kommt zu mir jetzt mehr als mein deutsch. i hab' dieses lied nicht so gern, aber vielleicht mit ein bisschen arbeit es wird besser. hilfe ist begruesst!
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i dissipate
into all these pieces you leave lying around
soak up my time
you leave them around
down where my feet tread
to soak up my mind
wouldn't you like to have it for your own?
you surely wouldn't be the first
go forth alone
or i'll turn you out again
i dissipate
into all these looks you leave lying around
soak up my thought
you leave them around
threaded about my chest
to soak up my mind
wouldn't you love to peruse it thoroughly
inch by inch, indeed not the first
go forth alone
i'll turn you out again
let them lay
for whatever point
do not forget
that i am mine